Fallensnow

[blitzy]

Name:

Fallensnow

Prefix Meaning:

Born in Nightclan became warrior there, became loner(changing her name to Fallen) then switched to Moonclan

Suffix Meaning:

Snow is because of the whiteness in her pelt

Age:

21 moons

Rank:

warrior

Clan:

Moonclan

Description:

Fallensnow is a light colored she cat, like most Moonclan cats. Her pelt may be light in color, but that doesn't mean she's a white she cat, despite what the name suggests. Fallensnow is a very light tabby she cat. The darkest points she has are her tail, legs, and face. The rest of her is very light. Her tail is the darkest, then her face, and finally her legs. Her tail is quite a sight. A black tail tip, with black rings around it, the closer it gets to her rump, the lighter it gets. There are only four complete black rings, including the tail tip. Then the black rings are lighter, and smaller. Her black rings seem to be broken, as they stop, but then reappear just below. The tail is the darkest part n this pretty tabby siamese cross she cat. Her face is a dusty light brown as a base, with darker stripes on it. Her stripes you couldn't really consider them a solid color. They're too light to be black, too light to be brown, and look more like a blackish to be brown. The two stripes on her cheek are rather pretty. If you look at them closely, you can see brown where the stripe is closer to her neck, and black where it's all but touching her eyes. These stripes continue over her face. Her nose, after looking closely at it, you can see it's tan. Pretty, huh?

Alright, face and tail done. Lets talk about legs and body. Fallensnow has a body that's all but a solid white. Looking closely and very very hard, you can see very very light tan stripes in it. Yes they are small, and yes they are thin. See them? They're very sparse, and spread, but they are there. Her body's an off white, not the purest around. More of a cream white than a snow white. Alright, her four legs. First we're gonna talk about her back feet. These two are lighter than her front, because of only one reason. Her stripes. Yes, the stripes that run through it. That creamy white is in both front and hind paws. Her stripes are a peachy tan in the front. Her biggest one is the third one in from her body, and is often the ones people notice when looking at her with just a glimpse. There are only five stripes that are "complete." Well from what I can tell. The last few, if they're even there, are broken. Alright, enough on the back. Front. Like mentioned just earlier, these are darker in color. The creamy white looks darker, and it is, but only slightly. Because of the stripes, the fur color looks like the bottom of her back paw, the one you can see better. (I'm not the best with lefts and rights, and don't feel like figuring that out.) The stripes, instead of being a peachy tan like they are on her two hind legs, are instead a peachy brown. The stripes look like the brown on her face, you know the ones on her side that you can see. These stripes are darker, and stand out more than what they do with her hind two paws.

Alright, time to mention a few details I've missed. Her eyes are a very pretty trait. Blue. They're a light crystal blue(and remind me of my dog's eyes). Her ears are the color of her tail, minus the black stripes. Darker around the base of them, and splotched with a gray black color on the back sides of them. Her nose is like no other I've seen. It's both black and pink. Her nose is outlined in black, but the center is pink. The black really makes the pink stand out, don't ya think?

Personality:

Fallensnow is a sweet and fiercely loyal cat. She follows the warrior code down to the word, and doesn't disobey it just a bit. Being a cat with her past, it's not surprising. Fallensnow enjoys eating mice and animals of the sort. She doesn't enjoy fighting, but that doesn't mean she won't lift a paw to defend herself. She's quite a natural at fighting really.

The tabby she cat is proud, determined, and stubborn at times. She doesn't let anyone push her around, and doesn't let anyone take advantage of her, not if she can do anything about it. If she has her mind set on something, there's no convincing her to change it. She doesn't like listening to advice from younger cats, especially apprentices. The way she sees it, she's older, she's wiser, and she can teach them, but they can't teach her.

Because of her history, Fallensnow feels she has to prove herself to her clan. Even though she was born in Nightclan, she tries to hide it from her clan. If any cat knows, then she wants to be the one to tell them. Fallensnow goes on any patrol she can, and hunts often, as well as making sure the borders are safe. She's careful with what she says to others, and tries to keep her distance from Nightclan, as some of them might recognize her. Fallensnow, in battle, fights hard, and fierce to defend the clan who took her in. She doesn't feel loyalty to Nightclan anymore, but wouldn't raise a paw against her sister, Frostshadow.

History:

When two warriors from Nightclan and Moonclan fall in love, you get this family. Frostshadow and Fallensnow. Because their mother, Silentscreech was in Nightclan, the two became Nightclan kits. Frostkit and Dustkit. The two sisters got along fine, each playing with the other. When they became apprentices, Frostpaw and Dustpaw got their mentors. They trained, learned the ways of the code, and soon were announced warriors. During their silent vigil, a black tom showed up. The two decided to handle the tom on their own, but found out he was their brother. They took him to the leader, and their brother was allowed to join the clan. He was made an apprentice. Not too long after that, Dustsnow met her father. Because of her curiousity, she wanted to know what Moonclan was like, and her father told her. She wasn't the biggest fan of her cave home, and decided to live in the light. Plus, her pelt would look more natural in her father's clan. It wasn't long after that that Dustsnow left Nightclan. She wanted to join Moonclan and be with her father.

So Dustsnow changed her name. She called herself Fallen as a loner. The she cat wasn't a loner for long, about two moons. She stayed a loner so long that way her Nightclan scent would go away. After all, the two clans were rivals, and Fallen thought they wouldn't accept her so easily because she was raised in Nightclan. So as a loner, she hunted for herself, got rid of her scent, and watched Moonclan, waiting for an opportunity to join the clan.

When she found that opportunity, she jumped right for it. The patrol took her back to camp, and of course her father, Whiterunner recognized her. After all, she looked like him. The clan, after discussion, took her in. She wanted to keep Fallen, as her name, and the clan allowed her. They gave her the suffix Snow because of her white pelt. Fallensnow.

[sunfrost]

Don't forget to finish this up Blitzy

[blitzy]

slowly working on it...

[Fia]

Nice, Blitzy! Just a few liiiiiittle things- what happened when she and Frostshadow met their brother? (Surely they didn't go, 'Oh, hi, long-lost sibling! Nice to meet you. Now leave our camp,' and leave it at that?) And what made her feel as if she should leave home and join MoonClan? (Had she met her father at some point before leaving?)

How does she get along in MoonClan nowadays, any lingering akwardness? (Relations to Clanmates would be... personality, I think.) Has she developed much of a relationship with her father?

(And I noticed that in the Prefix Description, it says she was born a loner. But in her history, she's born in NightClan. X3)

Just those little details and she's good to go!

[blitzy]

*facepalm* how'd I screw that up!?

[Fia]

No worries, all is well now! Your bio has been ACCEPTED and will soon be moved to the appropriate board. ^_____^