Blaze - DeathClan [OLD]

[thr33]

Name: Blaze

Prefix Meaning: The circumstances of his birth made him develop this name. It is assumed that his mother probably named him something else but he was too little to remember.

Suffix Meaning: N/A

Age: 14 moons (not very old but older than an apprentice)

Rank: Warrior

Clan: Death Clan

Description: Blaze is an average sized tom. He has a very dark gray pelt with grayer streaks throught. His eyes are about as orange as a cat's eyes can get which is one of the reasons why he goes by the name Blaze: his eyes seem to glow or blaze in the sunlight. Parts of his pelt are missing because of all the time he has spent as a loner has made it hard to get food and he's gotten lazier so he doesn't take care of himself more. Hopefully his initiation into Deathclan will make it easier to survive and make him look better.

His fighting style that he has developed is probably stranger than other Deathclan cats. He tries to think all of his actions through before he acts and usually gets a little beat up at first before he thinks of the best way to take his enemy down. For instance, if he is fighting a cat that uses his strength over his speed then Blaze would fight in a way that forced his opponent to run as much as possible. He is very good at making an enemy fight out of their element. He is not a strong fighter, he is a smart fighter. Brains over bron!

Personality: Blaze does have a sense of humor! He loves sarcasm the most in life and finds it hilarious! If he meets a cat the successfully pulls off a ‘Nice weather today,’ when it’s pouring outside, he may fall in love! If he isn’t being sarcastic, he may be saying a very dark joke. If you haven’t gotten the picture, Blaze is a cat that could have probably turned out decent but…turned a bit crazy along the way. Some things he says makes sense to him but doesn’t make sense to anyone else…poor Blaze.

Blaze is a more cool and calculated cat. He is a hard worker if it helps himself out in the end. Although he may seem like a team player, he’s out for himself in the end…even if he makes himself believe otherwise. Growing up as rogue has made Blaze become pretty anti social and prone to creating ‘awkward silences’. He can make great relationships if he meets a person that really gets him but that probably won’t happen. To everyone besides himself, Blaze is just a heartless ex-rogue that’s just using Death Clan to survive and will eventually leech off of them and move on when they die off.

History: 14 moons ago, a kitty pet (who’s name is unknown) gave birth to a beautiful gray tom! The name that she gave him is unknown. About a half a moon later, their twoleg den caught fire! Nobody knows how it happened…although it is unlikely…rumors have said that Blaze did it. Either way, it made a terrible life for a very young Blaze.

For the next three and a half moons, Blaze met a heartless rogue named Glare (where he may have also chosen his name from). Glare was the cat that would have been most like a parental figure to Blaze but he was a terrible example. He taught Blaze that you should always watch out for yourself and never trust anyone (which weren’t good lessons obviously) but he also taught him how to fight with his mind instead of his body. The last lesson that he learned from Glare was that, once you’ve received all you needed from a cat then get rid of them. In that same moon, Glare fell down a ravine and was never heard from since.

From Blaze’s age of four moons until today, he had been fighting for himself as a rogue and hunting for food in the north where it is much colder and icier. Rumors say that this gave him his icy heart. He then decided to join Death Clan because it was getting hard up north and there was more prey in the forest. No matter what you think he may be thinking, he may be going to get you next! Of course, these are all rumors of his past…the deaths may all have been coincidences…but what do you think?? Today, Blaze could be the most unlucky cat in the forest or the most intriguing and frightening mind that the forest will ever meet!

*Cue scary music* *Dun Dun Duuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn!*

Picture: Blaze

[nightrain]

Alright, your bio is good and has met all the requirements. However I do have one little BLAH comment. Have you ever seen or met a cat with orange eyes? Especially a red orange? I have never seen nor heard of cat with this color eyes.

[Fia]

Agreed; dark orange eyes are fine, but that red is... unnatural. X3 If he were possessed like Fading, it'd be a maybe, but as he's not and can't be... eh. Orange (like <this>) is as close to red as can be justified. You don't have to change the picture, though; we have plenty of bios that say, for example, "(<--- but with green eyes)". Just remove the 'reddish' bit from his physical description, please. X3

One more little thing about his appearance. It's fine that he's gray, but a kithood scorching wouldn't turn white fur permanently dark. Either make it so he was born gray, or that he's still got white fur, please. Unless you've got researched proof (beyond 'for some reason') that says burned white fur can stay gray as a cat grows up, in which case, by all means, let him be white-turned-gray!

And one small detail in his history, about the rumors about him setting his first home on fire. Do cats know how to deliberately start fires? That's a genuine question, not a rhetorical one; is there a way he could have done it?

Other than that, I agree with Night, he looks fine. ^____^

[thr33]

Okay, I think the post has been modified for the description stuff.

Reffering to the fire question...No. I don't think a cat could deliberately start a fire. I think those rumors just started up because some cats are paranoid.

[Fia]

Alrighty, thank ya much! Your bio has been ACCEPTED and will soon be moved to the appropriare board. Remember, DeathClan's taking over the forest now, so be sure to read up on all that!

[Fia]

ADOPTED BY: Saphire
November 2010